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| Rogue Reviews: Splash Page No splash page, and no need for one. Your layout looks a little cramped, what with all of those link buttons up at the top of your page. Maybe you could move them somewhere else? Content Main Page: First thing's first, let's get rid of the centered text in the opening paragraph. It makes your words look all crumpled up together and sloppy. "This is a fansite dedicated to yours truly Rogue. Her powers to asborb memories and abilities when coming in contact with anyone had caused her to be different from everyone else. Rogue had been looked down upon to be just another mutant from the eyes of society. Everyone just have to learn that Rogue and the mutants are here to stay." This doesn't make sense on many levels. First off, when someone says "yours truly" that means you are talking about yourself. So this leads me to believe that you have made this site from Rogue's point of view, and will talk like Rogue throughout the site. Then you go on in the second sentance to say Her...it just doesn't make sense. I advise tossing out the yours truly remark. I think the second sentance would look better written as "Her powers to absorb memories and mutant abilities after touching someone have cause her to feel different from everyone else." The third sentance would look better written as "Rogue has been looked down upon to be just another mutant by the eyes of society." Bio of Rogue: "17 but not pressumbly 18" . That was written down for her age. It would sound so much better written as "17, possibly 18." Rest of the Rogue Info: I can't really correct you on your facts or not since I'm only a fan of the X Men movies, but I can say that your information was well organized. I didn't catch any more grammatical mistakes. I think that maybe you could extend a bit on the Gambit and Rogue romance since you obviously favor it. Maybe you could make a page dedicated to the romance, or Rogue's crush on Scott and how it motivated her to do some of the things she's done. Screencaps: These thumbnails are rather small. They don't really look like thumbnails at all, just the original image shrunk down to tiny porportions. Either way, I would make them a bit bigger. It's hard to see which picture you want to look at when the thumbnails are this size. Rogue's Clothing Line: I think you could go a bit more in depth here. Maybe say which episode it was where she wore each outfit and describe each outfit. And maybe why you think it fit's Rogue's personality or why you think she chose to wear those particular clothes. Jean Therapy: This is a cute idea, I just don't think it'll take off. You don't seem to get into the character's personalities very well. Or maybe that's just because I've only seen the movies, I'm not sure. Stranded: Um...there's something wrong with the voting form. You can't see the words that go along with it, because your background is black. You need to be sure to change the font color for the voting form too, because most people aren't going to take the time to think to highlight the text so they can read it. Overall Sorry I couldn't help much with correcting information. I hope the review I gave you will help you organize your site better however. This site shows a lot of promise, although I didn't care much for the design you use. You seem to have a rather extensive Rogue site, at least from the X Men: Evolution point of view. I liked your extra sections like the stranded and the Rogue interview. They were things that most other fansites I've seen don't have. They kept me interested in the site, and actually made me want to watch X Men: Evolution. Technical Stuff Work on your thumbnailing, centered text, and the grammatical mistakes I mentioned. Keep it Up The extra sections. Very creative and original. Work Harder On Finding more information and expanding your information some. There is probabaly a lot more about Rogue that you can say. Expand on her relationships with Scott, Logan, and Gambit. You could probabaly have three legnthy pages on each of those relationships. The Final Say Would Rogue ever visit this site again? Actually, I have it bookmarked and plan on coming back to learn more about Rogue in this series. Rogue has rated this site: Average. It's on it's way to becoming a great fansite, but the poor organization and grammatical mistakes are dragging this site down. |
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